My Lonliness

Written by Jeet on Sunday, September 27, 2009 at 8:28 AM


I thought of something..
Something that could never be realized,
I was such a fool that
I was running after mirage,
The thing that never exists,
A beatiful dream that was practically immposible
The result was quite obivious....
A long and dark silence ...
In already doomed life...
The impact was so harsh that
Tears seemed to dry up..
When they came ,did not cross the brim of eyes,
Kept poking the eyes from within...
Moreover they doesnt come alone...
Bring the loneliness along...
To increase the depth of pain.

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4 Responses to "My Lonliness"

Comment by Arnav
September 27, 2009 at 10:45 AM #  

Full of mystery :)

Comment by Jeet
September 28, 2009 at 3:16 AM #  

kyo bhai?? mysterious kyo??

Comment by Chandrama
October 5, 2009 at 3:15 AM #  

This one sounded a little incomplete to me...I wanted to read more. But all said, its a good piece :)

Comment by Jeet
October 6, 2009 at 10:41 AM #  

Because life is incomplete..Still in progress.. :)
Anyways..Thanks for reading it..

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One of the most entrapping question indeed!!! Anyways, I believe in logic and reason.Seldom, I am swayed by the emotions. I am actually, a bit choosy about the relationships n friends and once they are then they are for good. I hate lies n liars. Matter of fact, I am very straight-forward and practical. Live life on my own standards. I hate being stick to conventional and senseless established beliefs.