"Melt" - Dedicated To My Love of Life !_!

Written by Jeet on Sunday, September 27, 2009 at 9:34 AM


Nobody has ever done this,
Possibly...nobody could have done this,
Unknowingly... But you have done ,
Unknown... Not only for you,
but for me too.
It happened,Just happened,
So slowly... That even I could not
hear the sound of,
Sound of something,
something... of steps,
Steps.. of the change,
That was making its way invading my heart,
Invasion...? Perhaps....
But a piece of stone can not be invaded.
Was it a dew-drop...?
A soft,gentle and innocent drop,
That has the power to melt
even the diamond,
Made my heart start melting,
And now where, there used to be stone,
There is left only liquid,
That flows through the way of eyes.

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4 Responses to ""Melt" - Dedicated To My Love of Life !_!"

Comment by Arnav
September 27, 2009 at 10:33 AM #  

Lovely Lines :)

The power to melt a stone .. nice.
Reminds me of the lines " power to open up a flower" from "u me and hum .."

Very romantic . :)


Keep writing and smiling :)

Comment by Jeet
September 28, 2009 at 3:14 AM #  

thanks dude..
i wrote it 4 yrs back.i did not modify it all though i felt like changing few things.
i wanted to ke my past intact.
anyways..

Comment by Chandrama
October 5, 2009 at 3:13 AM #  

Hey Jeet, read this poem and loved the last bit of it the most. There is an instant charm in your words though I feel some refinement is needed at some points. The pictures you've chosen compliment your state of mind really well. Wish to read lots more :)

Comment by Jeet
October 6, 2009 at 10:45 AM #  

Thanks for the hearty encouragement,Chandrama..
Like what kind of refinements? Actually its pretty old.Like 4 yrs back.Due to nostalgic reasons I did not refined it.
Anyways thanks Again. :)

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One of the most entrapping question indeed!!! Anyways, I believe in logic and reason.Seldom, I am swayed by the emotions. I am actually, a bit choosy about the relationships n friends and once they are then they are for good. I hate lies n liars. Matter of fact, I am very straight-forward and practical. Live life on my own standards. I hate being stick to conventional and senseless established beliefs.